201 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction Tue 29 Jun 2010, 21:54
GuiltyPleasures
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No Such Thing as "Normal", Part 8--
Joe had the feeling that whoever they were, be they his sister and brother in law, or imposters, they were on to him.
He had noticed a marked change in Amber's demeanor over the past several weeks, to the point he was now convinced that whoever she was, she wasn't the sister he had very hazy memories of as a child.
Amber's attitude towards her daughter and Jeremiah took a turn for the worse as well. Whatever was going to happen to them, Joe thought, it's going to happen soon.
The report Jeremiah got back from Dan was startling. Yes, the people his brother was living with were imposters, while the real Amber and Drew Carson were being held against their will in a secret location.
"Don't use force unless it is absolutely necessary," Dan had written in the communique to Jeremiah. "Meantime, be aware of yourself and your situation at all times, and never drop your guard. The lives of your niece and brother are at stake, as well as your own."
So, hang tight and hope they don't kill us? Jeremiah thought; Really, Dan? But, more information was coming, and Jeremiah looked at it and thought, what the fuck did we get ourselves into?
Karla Brinson was the Region Director, the contact for the imposters posing as Amber and Drew reported to? Jeremiah thought. This isn't possible!
Because Karla Brinson was Jeremiah and Joe's aunt. Their mother's sister.
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Karla had all the hangups that a younger sister with a talented and studious sibling had, and then some.
She was more than a little pissed off when her "perfect" older sister Antonia married a man who was not only older than her by nearly two decades, but was of mixed race. At least her daughter's father was white, she thought bitterly.
So it was not a problem for her to have her sister eliminated and her husband and daughter imprisoned. Karla didn't care what happened to the two sons her sister's marriage produced, they could die for all she cared.
Then they turn up like a couple of bad pennies a decade later, and Karla learned that they had been wards of the government's most feared opposition: David Draiman and his Disturbed Ones.
She had intel that stated the Donovan boys had extensive weapons and survival training prior to becoming Draiman's wards. That their "sister", the daughter of Draiman's companion, Jordan Terranova, had killed five New Army troops after the deaths of their guardians; that a fourth child, Nikolai San Marco, was in line to be a Disturbed Ones organizer.
Since it became clear that Joe Donovan and Antonia Carson didn't believe that the agents she sent to replace Amber and Drew Carson weren't who they said they were, there were two more people who needed to die. Karla had no trouble killing off her own flesh and blood. They had stained the family bloodline, which in Karla's mind, was unforgivable.
But Karla's main objective was to get information from Jeremiah Donovan. And if she had to threaten to kill his brother and his niece, or anyone else close to him to get it, then she'd do it.
Her goal, and her governments goal, was to eliminate David Draiman.
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"Just what is your problem, sweetie?" Karla sneered as the fake Amber reported that she was losing Joe Donovan and Antonia Carson in the believeability department. "You can't convince a couple of snot nosed kids to believe you're their sister/parent?"
"Joe called me out on a damn scar Amber has," the fake Amber replied. "And when Jeremiah comes to visit, he's not confiding in me about what his upbrining was like, especially the years he spend in the Draiman/Terranova household. Because God knows I've asked."
"Just because he's a college student means he's smarter than the whole government?" Karla said; "I don't fucking think so. He's of age so we can't force into the New Army, so the only thing we can do is make it very uncomfortable for him."
Karla was seething inside. She hated being made a fool of, but to be made a fool of by an 18 year old was just too much. Even if that 18 year old was her nephew.
"Bring Joe and Antonia to me!" Karla said. "Jeremiah may come around if his brother and niece have guns to their heads."
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The snack that Joe made for Antonia just sat there.
She was an hour late coming home from her all day kindergarten and Joe was worried. Amber had told them both this morning that she would be late and asked Joe to fix a snack for Antonia when she got home from school.
After two hours had passed and still no Antonia, Joe was starting to get alarmed. The illegitimate government kidnapped kids all the time from school, on their way home from school, practically at their front door...just like in Chicagoland. Joe worried that had happened to Antonia and got his phone out to call Jeremiah. Instead of dialing the number, Joe looked up and saw that he was surrounded by New Army guards.
"Joseph Donovan, you have been summoned to Regional headquarters to speak with the Region Director, Karla Brinson," the Guard Leader said.
"Karla Brinson?" Joe asked, recognizing the name from...somewhere.
"Yes. She is in charge in this Region."
"The name sounded familiar, like I'm supposed to know her somehow."
The Guard Leader just looked at him. He obviously hasn't been here long enough to fear Karla Brinson.
"Let's go!" he barked at Joe, "I have orders to bring you in."
"What for?" Joe asked, stalling for time. "And where's my niece?"
"Director Brinson wants to talk to you. Your niece Antonia is already there."
"Am I being charged with anything?" Joe asked, "Because if I'm not, then I demand that you bring Antonia to me."
Joe thought the Guard Leader was going to slap him, but he apparently thought better of it.
Then the Guard Leader covered him mouth with a cloth soaked in chloroform, and Joe collapsed.
But not before he activated the GPS button on his phone.
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Joe had the feeling that whoever they were, be they his sister and brother in law, or imposters, they were on to him.
He had noticed a marked change in Amber's demeanor over the past several weeks, to the point he was now convinced that whoever she was, she wasn't the sister he had very hazy memories of as a child.
Amber's attitude towards her daughter and Jeremiah took a turn for the worse as well. Whatever was going to happen to them, Joe thought, it's going to happen soon.
The report Jeremiah got back from Dan was startling. Yes, the people his brother was living with were imposters, while the real Amber and Drew Carson were being held against their will in a secret location.
"Don't use force unless it is absolutely necessary," Dan had written in the communique to Jeremiah. "Meantime, be aware of yourself and your situation at all times, and never drop your guard. The lives of your niece and brother are at stake, as well as your own."
So, hang tight and hope they don't kill us? Jeremiah thought; Really, Dan? But, more information was coming, and Jeremiah looked at it and thought, what the fuck did we get ourselves into?
Karla Brinson was the Region Director, the contact for the imposters posing as Amber and Drew reported to? Jeremiah thought. This isn't possible!
Because Karla Brinson was Jeremiah and Joe's aunt. Their mother's sister.
----------
Karla had all the hangups that a younger sister with a talented and studious sibling had, and then some.
She was more than a little pissed off when her "perfect" older sister Antonia married a man who was not only older than her by nearly two decades, but was of mixed race. At least her daughter's father was white, she thought bitterly.
So it was not a problem for her to have her sister eliminated and her husband and daughter imprisoned. Karla didn't care what happened to the two sons her sister's marriage produced, they could die for all she cared.
Then they turn up like a couple of bad pennies a decade later, and Karla learned that they had been wards of the government's most feared opposition: David Draiman and his Disturbed Ones.
She had intel that stated the Donovan boys had extensive weapons and survival training prior to becoming Draiman's wards. That their "sister", the daughter of Draiman's companion, Jordan Terranova, had killed five New Army troops after the deaths of their guardians; that a fourth child, Nikolai San Marco, was in line to be a Disturbed Ones organizer.
Since it became clear that Joe Donovan and Antonia Carson didn't believe that the agents she sent to replace Amber and Drew Carson weren't who they said they were, there were two more people who needed to die. Karla had no trouble killing off her own flesh and blood. They had stained the family bloodline, which in Karla's mind, was unforgivable.
But Karla's main objective was to get information from Jeremiah Donovan. And if she had to threaten to kill his brother and his niece, or anyone else close to him to get it, then she'd do it.
Her goal, and her governments goal, was to eliminate David Draiman.
----------
"Just what is your problem, sweetie?" Karla sneered as the fake Amber reported that she was losing Joe Donovan and Antonia Carson in the believeability department. "You can't convince a couple of snot nosed kids to believe you're their sister/parent?"
"Joe called me out on a damn scar Amber has," the fake Amber replied. "And when Jeremiah comes to visit, he's not confiding in me about what his upbrining was like, especially the years he spend in the Draiman/Terranova household. Because God knows I've asked."
"Just because he's a college student means he's smarter than the whole government?" Karla said; "I don't fucking think so. He's of age so we can't force into the New Army, so the only thing we can do is make it very uncomfortable for him."
Karla was seething inside. She hated being made a fool of, but to be made a fool of by an 18 year old was just too much. Even if that 18 year old was her nephew.
"Bring Joe and Antonia to me!" Karla said. "Jeremiah may come around if his brother and niece have guns to their heads."
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The snack that Joe made for Antonia just sat there.
She was an hour late coming home from her all day kindergarten and Joe was worried. Amber had told them both this morning that she would be late and asked Joe to fix a snack for Antonia when she got home from school.
After two hours had passed and still no Antonia, Joe was starting to get alarmed. The illegitimate government kidnapped kids all the time from school, on their way home from school, practically at their front door...just like in Chicagoland. Joe worried that had happened to Antonia and got his phone out to call Jeremiah. Instead of dialing the number, Joe looked up and saw that he was surrounded by New Army guards.
"Joseph Donovan, you have been summoned to Regional headquarters to speak with the Region Director, Karla Brinson," the Guard Leader said.
"Karla Brinson?" Joe asked, recognizing the name from...somewhere.
"Yes. She is in charge in this Region."
"The name sounded familiar, like I'm supposed to know her somehow."
The Guard Leader just looked at him. He obviously hasn't been here long enough to fear Karla Brinson.
"Let's go!" he barked at Joe, "I have orders to bring you in."
"What for?" Joe asked, stalling for time. "And where's my niece?"
"Director Brinson wants to talk to you. Your niece Antonia is already there."
"Am I being charged with anything?" Joe asked, "Because if I'm not, then I demand that you bring Antonia to me."
Joe thought the Guard Leader was going to slap him, but he apparently thought better of it.
Then the Guard Leader covered him mouth with a cloth soaked in chloroform, and Joe collapsed.
But not before he activated the GPS button on his phone.
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