Songs I wrote for my band.

tormented_insanity · 1 Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 11:45

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Defiance

I am unbound. I am unchained.
I have escaped the leaders of authority.
No one can stop me, and nothing can destory me.
My defiance is what you will fear.

This feeling of control is
filling me with contempt for
the ones who try to contain
this power. My mind has now
Awakened. You will see the terror
has begun inside of me.
I will not be shaken, you cannot
hold me down. I will eradicte
all of the resistance don't try to
stop the unavoidable.

I am held down by nothing.
Controlled by no one.
I listen only to the sadistic
voices in my head.
I'll make your skin crwal from
the inside out as you
succomb to my intrusion.

This feeling of control is
filling me with contempt for
the ones who try to contain
this power. My mind has now
Awakened. You will see the terror
has begun inside of me.
I will not be shaken, you cannot
hold me down. I will eradicte
all of the resistance don't try to
stop the unavoidable.

I trust no one.
Believing nothing.
Incinerating all of the
insignificant. Open your
blinded eyes and see
the disease is taking hold
of you.

This feeling of control is
filling me with contempt for
the ones who try to contain
this power. My mind has now
Awakened. You will see the terror
has begun inside of me.
I will not be shaken, you cannot
hold me down. I will eradicte
all of the resistance don't try to
stop the unavoidable.

That one I wrote about two weeks ago.

Calamity
The bloodstained walls of death's
embrace. A thousand fires burn
into the night. Souls decay as
sisease spreads. Your sickened mind
crawls, yearning for a cure to this
madness.

Horror that is unexplainable
while dominance is encouraged.
Pain and terror, destruction
catastrophic annihilation.
Brutality is unavoidable.
Embrace this calamity.

This power is uncontainable.
The rebellion will be eradicated
all resisters crushed. The visions of
our domination and the inexcapeable
mass mayhem will be lived.
There is no cure for this madness.

Horror that is unexplainable
while dominance is encouraged.
Pain and terror, destruction
catastrophic annihilation.
Brutality is unavoidable.
Embrace this calamity.

CrowX · 2 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 12:32

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Those are some real good written songs i really like the lyrics now i wanna hear you sing it.

tormented_insanity · 3 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 12:39

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Haha. Alot of people do. You are not alone.

Zerstörer · 4 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 12:44

Zerstörer

Sickened

I like the feeling behind the words... that is one of the hardest aspects of literature, and yet you make it look easy. Keep up the good work!

tormented_insanity · 5 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 15:33

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Thanks. I didn't actually expect people to really like them. When I get the chance, I'll post some others. I've got shitloads more where those came from. I'm always writing something so, I'll probably have more written by the end of today.

tormented_insanity · 6 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 17:25

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Penatlty

You've promised only pain.
you have given only hate.
This will be the end of all
that you have ever known.
You've taken their hope
leaving them nothing left
inside of their hearts.
This is the end for you.

Face your penalty, for the blood
that you have spilled. Pay the cost for
the lives you've taken. You will
serve your penalty.Now you will
face the end of all your torture.

You've led only lies. You have
started only wars. This will be
the end of this darkness.
You've severed all their lifelines
You have given them the only
emotion they will ever know.
This is the end of all you've done.

Face your penalty, for the blood
that you have spilled. Pay the cost for
the lives you've taken. You will
serve your penalty.Now you will
face the end of all your torture.

Your consequences are severe.
You will suffer in the relentless
agony you have forced upon countless
innocents.You will be left behind.
Haunted and alone.Just like the souls you
have destroyed.

Face your penalty, for the blood
that you have spilled. Pay the cost for
the lives you've taken. You will
serve your penalty.Now you will
face the end of all your torture.

The Rebellion

Slowly my mind is reeling.
My eyes have finally seen the truth.
Religion is a danger to all of this
society. Join me in this riot.
We are crushing all
resistance.

We are the rebellion. The
only chance you have for
salvation. Ignore the lies of
redemption.Hear the cries of
insineration.We arerising against
them. Lashing out. We are the
rebellion.

I will not see reason. Their
talk of dominance is the only
proof that I need to testify
against these close minded dictators.
Religion is a danger to all of this
society. Join me in this invasion.
To destroy what's left of them.

We are the rebellion. The
only chance you have for
salvation. Ignore the lies of
redemption.Hear the cries of
insineration.We arerising against
them. Lashing out. We are the
rebellion.

Join the rebellion.
Bring on the violence.
Crucsh the insignificant.
I promise they will
never know what hit them.

We are the rebellion. The
only chance you have for
salvation. Ignore the lies of
redemption.Hear the cries of
insineration.We arerising against
them. Lashing out. We are the
rebellion.

Zerstörer · 7 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 17:48

Zerstörer

Sickened

You have a very strong talent there!

Want to do my literature homework next year? Just kidding...

tormented_insanity · 8 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 17:51

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Haha. I might take you up on that...just kiding.

Zerstörer · 9 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 17:54

Zerstörer

Sickened

What genre of music does your band play?

tormented_insanity · 10 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 17:58

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Technically we don't play anything, since there is only a drummer and a vocalists lol, but mostly metal with some more melodic rock thrown in there.

Bowers · 11 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 19:34

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those songs are very well written and they seem to be written with a similar message to the one that is given out by alot of the songs on the sickness album

tormented_insanity · 12 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sat 23 May 2009, 19:55

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Thanks Bowsers! Really? Huh. Never compared them to The Sickness, and you are right. They kinda do relay a similar message. Funny.

zealouso · 13 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sun 24 May 2009, 05:43

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tormented_insanity · 14 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sun 24 May 2009, 12:25

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Haha. Lacuna Coil? Yeah right. I'm not nearly as good.

Zerstörer · 15 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sun 24 May 2009, 12:31

Zerstörer

Sickened

It's interesting how you can put a minimal of effort into something, and everyone thinks it's really good, but they don't like something you put alot of effort into...

tormented_insanity · 16 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sun 24 May 2009, 12:33

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I am quite confused by your statement but oh well. lol

Zerstörer · 17 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sun 24 May 2009, 12:36

Zerstörer

Sickened

Heh. As an inventor/philosopher, I get that alot... Even from physicists.

What I'm saying is that sometimes, something that just comes naturally is really appreciated by the general public, but when you have to think really hard and actually work for it, they don't like it.

tormented_insanity · 18 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sun 24 May 2009, 12:40

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I got that, but I'm not exactly sure why you said it.

Zerstörer · 19 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sun 24 May 2009, 12:42

Zerstörer

Sickened

To be unpredictable, lol... Actually, I said it because it seems to fit the conversation that was going on. I have terrible social skills...

tormented_insanity · 20 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Sun 24 May 2009, 13:04

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So do I, but how did it fit?

TheSickness · 21 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Mon 25 May 2009, 09:37

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ah don't torture him for answers haha you are a very good lyricist, Idk whether I'd like the songs though, I need to hear it to get a feel for it

Ravensclaw · 22 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Mon 25 May 2009, 10:03

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there good real good

DYLANPCRIDDLE · 23 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Mon 25 May 2009, 13:12

DYLANPCRIDDLE

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The lyrics have potential for good songs. You should put a wav recording or something on the site so we can hear it sung/played or somethin.

tormented_insanity · 24 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Mon 25 May 2009, 21:05

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I don't know how to do that. I am...technilogically challenged. lol. I don't have them recorded on anything because you can't exactly make songs work with just a drummer and a vocalist.

DYLANPCRIDDLE · 25 Re: Songs I wrote for my band. Tue 26 May 2009, 01:21

DYLANPCRIDDLE

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tormented_insanity wrote:I don't know how to do that. I am...technilogically challenged. lol. I don't have them recorded on anything because you can't exactly make songs work with just a drummer and a vocalist.

I see. Well they sound good anyways.

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