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1 Disturbed Haiku thread on Sat 04 Sep 2010, 20:13

Okay, make up a Haiku having to do with Disturbed (something about the band, or based on song lyrics) and post it here.

A Haiku is a poem of 3 lines, where the first line has 5 syllables, the second has 7, and the third has 5 again. They're usually pretty unclear in their meaning.

I'll start the thread with an example:

The sickness rises
Feelings cannot be denied
Demon is woken.


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2 Re: Disturbed Haiku thread on Sat 04 Sep 2010, 22:57


Ohh...haiku @-@

Our power shall rise
Ten Thousand...unstoppable
The Sickness shall spread

(btw Danny, your haiku will sound better if you said "demon has woken" just a suggestion :))

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3 Re: Disturbed Haiku thread on Sun 05 Sep 2010, 06:29

Yeah that's probably better O.o

Btw, maybe this should be moved to Creative Arts?

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4 Re: Disturbed Haiku thread on Mon 06 Sep 2010, 08:22


lol, ask Mike or Raven xD

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