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1Disturbed Haiku thread Empty Disturbed Haiku thread Sat 04 Sep 2010, 20:13

moomoo

moomoo
Okay, make up a Haiku having to do with Disturbed (something about the band, or based on song lyrics) and post it here.

A Haiku is a poem of 3 lines, where the first line has 5 syllables, the second has 7, and the third has 5 again. They're usually pretty unclear in their meaning.

I'll start the thread with an example:

The sickness rises
Feelings cannot be denied
Demon is woken.


GO!

2Disturbed Haiku thread Empty Re: Disturbed Haiku thread Sat 04 Sep 2010, 22:57

Yumiyuri

Yumiyuri
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Ohh...haiku @-@

Our power shall rise
Ten Thousand...unstoppable
The Sickness shall spread


(btw Danny, your haiku will sound better if you said "demon has woken" just a suggestion :))

3Disturbed Haiku thread Empty Re: Disturbed Haiku thread Sun 05 Sep 2010, 06:29

moomoo

moomoo
Yeah that's probably better O.o

Btw, maybe this should be moved to Creative Arts?

4Disturbed Haiku thread Empty Re: Disturbed Haiku thread Mon 06 Sep 2010, 08:22

Yumiyuri

Yumiyuri
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lol, ask Mike or Raven xD

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