Something I wrote a while ago. Has no title though.


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kronik_khaos


Believer
Don't feed me your lies
because I've had enough.
In the end it's you who's
screwed.

Don't bother to apologize,
it's a waste of breath.
You're a waste of my time.
Get it through your head.

I don't need you or
anyone else in my life.
I've been fucked over for
the very last time.

You can come crawling
back on your hands and knees
but don't be offended when I
laugh in your face.

People like you are exactly
why I am who I am.
Get out of my face before
I kill you too.

There's plenty of room
for you in the hell that you
scorn. Go ahead, piss me off again.
I haven't slit someones throat in
while and I'm getting antsy...

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Disturbed1forEternity


God of the Mind
That's not bad. A little violent, but it's not bad at all.

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kronik_khaos


Believer
Thanks ((:

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Disturbed1forEternity


God of the Mind
No problem, hon. I think it's good to show young talent the recognition they deserve.

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Dawn_Cato


Global Moderator
It's edgy...I like it...good job.



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4everDisturbed


Inside The Fire
Hey did you write your signature? I like it

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kronik_khaos


Believer
No. It's actually lyrics to my faveorite song by Bullet For My Valentine called All These I Hate. I wish I wrote it though.

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4everDisturbed


Inside The Fire
I knew it sounded familiar. I love bfmv just don't listen to that song as much compared to the others.

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