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1A Couple Poems Written By Me Empty A Couple Poems Written By Me Mon 25 May 2009, 20:32

Cujari

Cujari
I've written somewhere between 300 to 400 poems and 4 songs. These aren't the best, but they're the most recent. <3


The Caring

A heart given without regret,
Until lost by the Careless.

Narcissism borne from him,
Selflessness for the selfish.

Compromises made only by the Caring.

Nothing but ungrateful gestures,
With the fatal final blow.

The tears continue in waves,
Too copious to bear at once.

A lifetime passes through each moment.




In Return

I’ve given you nothing less than all,
But in return, I’m given nothing.
My heart and soul were torn apart,
Which left me numb after the start.

I had concern for you alone,
But in return, I’m handed pain.
No indication did I receive
That you had always intended to leave.

So when you crawl on hands and knees,
For my return, I’ll make you bleed.
Every part of me you’ve numbed,
Except the hate to which I’ve succumbed.


Chelsey C

2A Couple Poems Written By Me Empty Re: A Couple Poems Written By Me Tue 26 May 2009, 01:33

CrowX

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Those are some real nice poems you got there.Really like in return

3A Couple Poems Written By Me Empty Re: A Couple Poems Written By Me Tue 26 May 2009, 05:22

zealouso

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oh, thats nice Missy, hope u could be a poet, hahah :lol:

4A Couple Poems Written By Me Empty Re: A Couple Poems Written By Me Tue 26 May 2009, 16:26

Darkking

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vary nice :)

i love a good poem and these are good...keep them coming i hope to see more of your work.

5A Couple Poems Written By Me Empty Re: A Couple Poems Written By Me Tue 26 May 2009, 20:15

tormented_insanity

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From one writer to another: Those are absofreakin' amazing! I want more, so keep em' coming.

6A Couple Poems Written By Me Empty <3 Tue 26 May 2009, 20:33

Cujari

Cujari
Thanks for the comments, appreciate it! I think I'll put a song and a few more poems up soon.

7A Couple Poems Written By Me Empty Re: A Couple Poems Written By Me Tue 26 May 2009, 20:38

tormented_insanity

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Songs are what I write, and speaking of which, you think you could read some of the ones I posted? I just put a new one up and I want to see what a fellow writer thinks of it.

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