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1 Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Mon 11 May 2009, 15:47

Ravensclaw


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We Know What There Sound Is But If You Had To Write A Song What Would It Be Like Here Are My Lyrics To What I Think Mine Should Be Like

"Mine"

yey hay ah

swear to know all the lies you have told
now you will know what learks in the night
im a force to be wrekend with u should be
afraid of my sight now i wish i could know what
makes you tick in the light

monster you have become just another shadow that creeps
in the night i wish i knew what its like to know what
redemption feels like and now i wish to know the tracks you leave in the night
you will be mine its only a matter of to time to know the coward you have
become you will be mine

hahahaha your mine you will be mine

now that you know what you are and what you left behind
i wish i could know what goes through your mind
its all a joke to you to play with my head and
after now i have you locked in my sights

monster i have become just another shadow that creeps
in the night i wish i knew what its like to know what
redemption feels like and now i wish to know the tracks you leave in the night
you will be mine its only a matter of to time to know the coward you have
become you will be mine

all that the torement you feel inside i wish i could know what salvation feels like
just to know

monster i have become just another shadow that creeps
in the night i wish i knew what its like to know what
redemption feels like and now i wish to know the tracks you leave in the night
you will be mine its only a matter of to time to know the coward you have
become you will be mine

hahahaha your mine you will be mine
hahahaha its time you will be mine
hahahaha your mine you will be mine
hahahaha its time you will be mine

my first song what dio u think ive never writen a song before i bet david could do better job then me not a bad atempt thow right



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2 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Mon 11 May 2009, 16:08

Bowers


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good job got any idea what the music would be to go along with it?

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3 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Mon 11 May 2009, 16:11

Ravensclaw


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it would have that fightting sound to it like sons of plunder letting the fake people out there know that they are marked and im comming for them lol



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4 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Mon 11 May 2009, 16:20

Morbid Spawn


One of The Ten Thousand
What De Fuck.


Wha wha what!

What de fuck is going on!
Your howling like a banshee, I dont understand..
What de fuck, why dont you like me? Take your hand back, you cant deny waht has been giving to me...

For how long will you try to destroy me, youll never meet another like me!
What de fuck, you say that I am a deceiver but your facade cant disguise the fact that you are Sickened,
From wanting me!

WHAT DE FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ha ahahahahaahhaha
And when I dream... That mistress comes to my mind.
Take your place... at her side... and become INDESTRUCTIBLE

What de fuck!
waht de fuck
wahhhht

de

Fuck...



Wow that really... sucks lol

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5 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Mon 11 May 2009, 16:30

Bowers


Immortalized
thats strange Lol

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6 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Mon 11 May 2009, 19:10

Morbid Spawn


One of The Ten Thousand
You should make your own...lazy

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7 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Mon 11 May 2009, 21:38

TheSickness


Loading The Weapon
Hahaha you chopped up fear/facade/deceiver/sickened/want/inside the fire/indestructible/
very nice

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8 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Thu 21 May 2009, 00:55

DYLANPCRIDDLE


One of The Ten Thousand
Run and hide again
Take everything away
Hide behind the mask this time
You bleed internally

Run and hide again
Liberate your mind
I'll let the Darkness cover me
Your too damn good for the killing kind

When your heart is broken
You've woken up the demon in me
When your own have died
I'm another god of the mind
When your heart is broken
I pray you for the words I've spoken
I don't Remember
I just cannot awaken

Two worlds collide
Men of steel, men of power
Your facade can't disguise
Im losing control by the hour

Two worlds collide
Take everything away
I swallow my pride
And throw my colours away

When your heart is broken
You've woken up the demon in me
When your own have died
I'm another god of the mind
When your heart is broken
I pray you for the words I've spoken
I don't Remember
I just cannot awaken

When there's no more pride
When your own have died
Look in my face, slip in my soul
Run and hide again
Relive this final sin
Look in my face, slip in my soul.

When your heart is broken
You've woken up the demon in me
When your own have died
I'm another god of the mind
When your heart is broken
I pray you for the words I've spoken
I don't Remember
I just cannot awaken

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9 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Thu 21 May 2009, 17:36

tormented_insanity


Loading The Weapon
Defiance

V1 I am unbound. I am unchained.
I have escaped the leaders of authority.
No one can stop me, and nothing can destory me.
My defiance is what you will fear.

Chorus This feeling of control is
filling me with contempt for
the ones who try to contain
this power. My mind has now
Awakened. You will see the terror
has begun inside of me.
I will not be shaken, you cannot
hold me down. I will eradicte
all of the resistance don't try to
stop the unavoidable.

V2 I am held down by nothing.
Controlled by no one.
I listen only to the sadistic
voices in my head.
I'll make your skin crwal from
the inside out as you
succomb to my intrusion.

Chorus This feeling of control is
filling me with contempt for
the ones who try to contain
this power. My mind has now
Awakened. You will see the terror
has begun inside of me.
I will not be shaken, you cannot
hold me down. I will eradicte
all of the resistance don't try to
stop the unavoidable.

V3 I trust no one.
Believing nothing.
Incinerating all of the
insignificant. Open your
blinded eyes and see
the disease is taking hold
of you.

Chorus This feeling of control is
filling me with contempt for
the ones who try to contain
this power. My mind has now
Awakened. You will see the terror
has begun inside of me.
I will not be shaken, you cannot
hold me down. I will eradicte
all of the resistance don't try to
stop the unavoidable.

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10 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Fri 02 Apr 2010, 22:21

S.M.F


Eye of the Storm
Yours is my favorite Morbid. Its so in your face.

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11 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Sun 04 Apr 2010, 12:55

_KJ_


A Welcome Burden
yeah i like morbib's the best =P

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12 Re: Create Your Own Disturbed Song on Sat 10 Apr 2010, 01:22

GuiltyPleasures


Global Moderator
Let me think of something, because God only knows I have Disturbed-like lyrics swirling around in my brain!



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