Some of my poems


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1 Some of my poems on Mon 03 Oct 2011, 19:59

So, I've been a writter for years now. I'm gonna post up some stuff... and any input would be nice :)
This first one is called Hatred for You. I wrote it about a girl I was in love with some time ago, and how badly it ended between us. This one even has a little bit of a Disturbed song in it hahah
I could have been all you wanted.
But you were deception.
A plague growing inside my mind.
Forging a veil of steeled lies.
Hard over my blue eyes.
I couldn't see.
Now that your dead to me.
Get into the ground.
Im tired of feeling bound.
Restless and demented.
Now that i've been replaced by a lust.
Sacrificed all of my true trust.
I see what it is... its all but died
I remember when this parasite ate nothing but my pride.

Fucked over yet again.
I was willing to call you a friend.
But even my words that have never been a cage.
Cannot relay my anger and rage!

I may not have been perfect... but I've been true.
Never wanted to be without you
Fuck! the words refuse to abuse.
The surface of my Hatred for You!

I should of seen all of this coming.
A hell of de ja vu
But something - scar bled has bred.
Animosity of hating days.
Lending to decaying ways.
So full of bullshitDeceiving hypocrite.
Now I've been received.
Dead wishes have conceived.
A brand new genesis.
I wish I could say nothing remains.
But tears are disguised in reigns.
In someone that really cares for me.
An entity that I will not let be an enemy.
Fucked over yet again.
I was willing to call you a friend.
But even my words that have never been a cage.
Cannot relay my anger and rage!

I may not have been perfect... but I've been true.
Never wanted to be without you
Fuck! the words refuse to abuse.
The surface of my Hatred for You!

Like jesus killed for his sins.
Ill drill the nails through your hands.
My hatred barely tamed by affection new
Leaving no redemption inside me for you.
I see a look inside new eyes.
One containing no lies.
If you really loved me the you afford.
You would've accepted my world...

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2 Re: Some of my poems on Mon 10 Oct 2011, 04:23

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I really like this! Thank you for sharing it...it's amazing to me how you can construct severity as well as expressing you're emotional melancholy of losing love, it's very well written...good job.



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3 Re: Some of my poems on Mon 10 Oct 2011, 14:23

Well thanks you!!! I may post more, idk yet haha :p
Nice avvy btw :)
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