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1 Asylum My Version on Thu 07 Oct 2010, 19:32

Ravensclaw


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These lyrics are my own and explain how i was feeling inside when my grandparents died

Asylum lyrics: By Raven

VERSE 1
scared of the world around me the fear to move on don't look they will see the pain i harbor its like a monster surrounds me i want to grow but no one will let me you know most people will never truly know what i learned in life

Chorus
Release me from the bonds that contain me
I need asylum a refuge from my problems a safe heaven from all that
is wrong in my life i can do no wrong but i cant seem to do whats right just release

VERSE 2
the past is now gone i must think of the future i must think of the light i will never forget now how you lay there on the floor weeping for the lost souls that you once loved they are gone now i must try to move on

and by the way my mom was the one weeping on the floor by the way not me so that's all i have sorry so what you guys think






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2 Re: Asylum My Version on Thu 07 Oct 2010, 21:24

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That's freakin' awesome, Raven! I love it!!

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3 Re: Asylum My Version on Fri 08 Oct 2010, 13:51

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Very Good Raven



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4 Re: Asylum My Version on Fri 08 Oct 2010, 14:52

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That's pretty deep... but I like it. It's always good to release those feelings somehow, be it by writing poetry, or music, or art. And you have to move on, move forward. It's all part of the grieving process.



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5 Re: Asylum My Version on Sat 09 Oct 2010, 01:41

Yumiyuri


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Wow...that's really awesome Raven :)

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