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1Asylum My Version Empty Asylum My Version Thu 07 Oct 2010, 19:32

Ravensclaw

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These lyrics are my own and explain how i was feeling inside when my grandparents died

Asylum lyrics: By Raven

VERSE 1
scared of the world around me the fear to move on don't look they will see the pain i harbor its like a monster surrounds me i want to grow but no one will let me you know most people will never truly know what i learned in life

Chorus
Release me from the bonds that contain me
I need asylum a refuge from my problems a safe heaven from all that
is wrong in my life i can do no wrong but i cant seem to do whats right just release

VERSE 2
the past is now gone i must think of the future i must think of the light i will never forget now how you lay there on the floor weeping for the lost souls that you once loved they are gone now i must try to move on

and by the way my mom was the one weeping on the floor by the way not me so that's all i have sorry so what you guys think




2Asylum My Version Empty Re: Asylum My Version Thu 07 Oct 2010, 21:24

Disturbed1forEternity

Disturbed1forEternity
God of the Mind
That's freakin' awesome, Raven! I love it!!

3Asylum My Version Empty Re: Asylum My Version Fri 08 Oct 2010, 13:51

CrowX

CrowX
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Very Good Raven

4Asylum My Version Empty Re: Asylum My Version Fri 08 Oct 2010, 14:52

GuiltyPleasures

GuiltyPleasures
Global Moderator
That's pretty deep... but I like it. It's always good to release those feelings somehow, be it by writing poetry, or music, or art. And you have to move on, move forward. It's all part of the grieving process.

5Asylum My Version Empty Re: Asylum My Version Sat 09 Oct 2010, 01:41

Yumiyuri

Yumiyuri
Immortalized
Wow...that's really awesome Raven :)

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