Afew song's I wrote for my band....if you want rate then 1-10


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Become

Opening
Once upon a time there was a little boy who always thought the world would hate him. till one day he realized he had to become another being. Just a simple thing like smart or brave or JUST PURE EVIL. And now the truth has been revealed, he simply had become one with you...

Verse 1
Become, one of the other ones
Become, just another human
Become, everything you hated
For the sake of changing
Become, someone everyone loves
Become, simple yet difficult
Become, the final truth
For the sake of changing
Become, hated by the law
Become, savior of the poor
Become, holy and deliberate
Become, A NEW YOU

Chorus
Because once there was a chance to redeem yourself. And now there’s nothing but war and HATRED. You wish there was someone to help you become the THING THAT YOU ARE!!!!!!!!

Verse 2
Become, the wise and mythical
Become, the brave and only one
Become, the thing that everyone fears
For the sake of changing
Become, only you and nothing more
Become, one of the political
Become, the cure just
Become, THE ONLY TRUTH

Chorus
Because once there was a chance to redeem yourself. And now there’s nothing but war and HATRED. You wish there was someone to help you become the THING THAT YOU ARE!!!!!!!!

(Guitar solo)

Verse 3
BECOME, final yet incomplete
Become, nothing but everything
Become, all that is known to you
Become, THE REMIDY

Chorus x2
Because once there was a chance to redeem yourself. And now there’s nothing but war and HATRED. You wish there was someone to help you become the THING THAT YOU ARE!!!!!!!!
Because once there was a chance to redeem yourself. AND NOW there’s nothing but war and HATRED. You wish there was someone to help you become the THING THAT YOU ARE!!!!!!!!

Ending
Become, you.. Become, you
Become, you.. Become, you
BECOME, YOU!!!!!!!

Erase

Opening
Destroying the world, denying the truth, rebelling the pain, involving the brute, conceding the mage, enforcing the thief, returning the book, to all the deceased

Verse 1
You are aware that all has been lost
Because you chose to enjoy the loss
You simply couldn’t do the right thing
For wealth was the important thing
And now you’ve lost the biggest thing
Which happens to by everything

Chorus
All you had to do was just choose
And the choice your biggest mistake
From the tip of life to nothing
You erased humanity from its place

Verse 2
With each decade you slowly lose your mind
And it’s all because you believed a lie
You brought shame to those who had trusted you
And now you got nothing in return you know it's true


Chorus
All you had to do was just choose
And the choice your biggest mistake
From the tip of life to nothing
You erased humanity from its place
For without enough of remembrance
You could just save everything as your own
But who would you brag about it too?
You erased humanity from its place

(Guitar Solo)

Break
Destroy, Deny, Rebel, involve, concede, enforce, return
Destroy, Deny, Rebel, involve, concede, enforce, return
Destroy, Deny, Rebel, involve, concede, enforce, return
Destroy, Deny, Rebel, involve, concede, enforce, return


Chorus
All you had to do was just choose
And the choice your biggest mistake
From the tip of life to nothing
You erased humanity from its place
For without enough of remembrance
You could just save everything as your own
But who would you brag about it too?
You erased humanity from its place

Ending
Erased
(humanity from its place)
Erased
(humanity from its place)

Pure War

Opening
go
fight
strike
pure
WAR!!!!!!!!!!

Verse 1
I cannot stop much insanity, all I want is to help my family, nothing else here but calamity, I hope all they get is agony
don't, you, care, if this,
war, will, end?
'cause, I, swear, if it don't,
I, will, descend to

Chorus
Nothing in this war is fair, and it seems as if no one cares, I don't have a simple remedy, 'cause all I need is entity

Verse 2
don't believe that this is finally, something that stops your pure sanity, as I wish there will be plenty, of nothing else but per amity
why, dos, n't, it matter,
when, we, die?
all, I, care, for now is,
WILL, I, SURVIVE!?!?!?!?!?!

Chorus
Nothing in this war is fair, and it seems as if no one cares, I don't have a simple remedy, 'cause all I need is entity
WAR is upon us and NOW we shall all die but CAN we just remake a PURE war inside......my........MIND!!!!!!

(Guitar Solo)

Break
RAW!
I know now that there is pain inside us and we can't stop now because it will control us so if we use our strength to deny them there's then we must fight together in this
HELL AGAIN!!!!!!!

Chorus x2
Nothing in this war is fair, and it seems as if no one cares, I don't have a simple remedy, 'cause all I need is entity
AH, AH, AH!
Nothing in this war is fair, and it seems as if no one cares, I don't have a simple remedy, 'cause all I need is entity

Ending
GO!
FIGHT!
STRIKE!
PURE!
war.........................

Blind

Opening
Female: are you okay?, Hello?, Hey are you...HELP, ANYONE, HELP!
Verse 1
there's a reason we all die, there's a place no one survives, I'm a phantom of despair, I'm the one that brought them here, can there be any escape?, even now they dissipate, I no longer see them bow, all I see is you right now.

Chorus
I try to make it past the end I can't find
but as we go on I start losing my mind
there's no help anyone can bring me now,
there's not even a way to release now
I must be blind 'cause I can't see anything.
(can't see anything)

Verse 2
I'll try my best to succeed, even if I truly can't see, Believe in nothing, gain control, release a feeling still untold, If I'm left alone I'll die, You're the one keeping me ALIVE, I can't even remember how, but all I see is you right NOW!

Chorus
I try to make it past the end I can't find
but as we go on I start losing my mind
there's no help anyone can bring me now,
there's not even a way to release now
I must be blind 'cause I can't see anything.
(can't see anything)

Mini Chorus
I must be blind 'cause I can't see anything
but you........
but YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(Guitar Solo)

Break
If all I know is right then what is wrong here I can't tell, but all I think of right now is "when will I get to HELL?", I see only one thing, and it's not by trying, If I don't surpass this, I will end up DYING!!!!!

Chorus
I try to make it past the end I can't find
but as we go on I start losing my mind
there's no help anyone can bring me now,
there's not even a way to release now
I must be blind 'cause I can't see anything.
(can't see anything)

Ending
I can't see anything
(can't see anything)
I can't see anything
(can't see anything)
I must be blind 'cause I can't see ANYTHING!

Fight Me

Opening
(kids screaming like at a playground brawl)
Kid one: Hit him, come on
Kid two: break his teeth
Kid three: boooring!
(whistle)

Verse 1
you're a menace, you're a shame, you're pathetic, you're insane, you're in trouble, you're in worse, you're defeated, you're submersed, you're completed, you will stay, you just cheated, start to pray

Verse 2
You're not ready for a fight, you had barely just survived, if it's blood you wanna see, you best start something with me

Chorus
LET'S GO FIGHT ME!
If you think that you are tough
you haven't been with Undefined enough
to us you're weaker than a walking fig
you're gonna learn the meaning of pain you dig?

Verse 3
you're no bully, you're just weak, you have lost, don't even speak, T F S Y, check your teeth, they're all gone, whoops was that me?

Chorus
LET'S GO FIGHT ME!
If you think that you are tough
you haven't been with Undefined enough
to us you're weaker than a walking fig
you're gonna learn the meaning of pain you dig?
and of the few that live to tell
their lives are nothing but a living hell
so if you want to taste the victory
you better not start anything with me

LET'S GO FIGHT ME!

(Guitar Solo)

Break
I see you are not ready to battle us
the only way you'll be a warrior is if you toughen up
you can't take on a single man, let alone armies by command
you SEE there's something wrong, FINISH IT!!!!!!!!
and if you can achieve that glory you can finally see the frontlines of the fights that will make you a true MAN!!!!
now all you have to do is.......
FIGHT ME!!!!!!!!!!

Chorus
If you think that you are tough
(RUN AWAY!!!!)
you haven't been with Undefined enough
to us you're weaker than a walking fig
you're gonna learn the meaning of pain you dig?
(FIGHT ME!!!!!!)
and of the few that live to tell
their lives are nothing but a living hell
so if you want to taste the victory
you better not start anything with me

Ending
LET'S GO FIGHT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Scorched

Opening
If I die, promise you won't think twice, stay with me till the grave, don't give yourself away....

Verse 1
you had it rough, demons and such, breaking your limits, you had enough, left for some time, came back full of life, ready to love, and yes it was fun
then came the storm, broken and torn, you broke the steam, by loving me
I knew the spark happened and sure you were a sight, but then betrayal was among us and I was ready for a fight

Chorus
Well if it's love then I don't know what to believe
when everything around us is a distant memory
all we have in our minds is what is truly in control
and now the pages have been scorched and I don't care how so...

Verse 2
Months went by, we were doing fine, then disaster struck, we ran out of luck, then the tension brewed, we split for a few, but I know we knew, we couldn't be apart
then the spark reappeared, and we LOVED with no fear, till one faithful night, you gave up the fight

Chorus
Well if it's love then I don't know what to believe
when everything around us is a distant memory
all we have in our minds is what is truly in control
and now the pages have been scorched and I don't care how so
there was SCREAMING in our heads
we began to leave again
and I watched the pages burn
and the screams became unheard
UNSCORCHED PAST COME BACK!!!!

(Guitar Solo)

Chorus x2
Well if it's love then I don't know what to believe
when everything around us is a distant memory
all we have in our minds is what is truly in control
and now the pages have been scorched and I don't care how so
there was SCREAMING in our heads
we began to leave again
and I watched the pages burn
and the screams became unheard
Well if it's love then I don't know what to believe
when everything around us is a distant memory
all we have in our minds is what is truly in control
and now the pages have been scorched and I don't care how so
there was BLEEDING in our heads
we began to LIVE again
and as I watched the pages burn
then all the demons came to her

Ending
and now I lye here all alone
with nothing but a broken down town home
I wish I saw it coming in the end
but the scorched book was still in your hand

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