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1 a poem I just thought up on Thu 05 Aug 2010, 19:28


Down With the Sickness
Who knows, maybe I'll eventually use this for a song for my band. Enjoy :D

Your lie is my only truth
Your only lie is my ugly truth

And in days I was with you
I should have waited for the flower to bloom

Despite all the warnings I gave it my best shot
Was it hesitation or the fact that I never gave up?

Like from hot to cold
And a rusting gold
And a flower pedal that now withers
Some truth I now hold
Back to a familiar old
Summer is no longer waiting for Winter's shiver

Will I forever relive the day?
She just stands and walks away

Last edited by JEC on Sat 28 Aug 2010, 18:38; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : typeo)

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2 Re: a poem I just thought up on Wed 01 Sep 2010, 00:21


Good work. I can't make poems (or write lyrics) for crap, so it's great to observe the work of someone that has a talent I don't. Keep writing, you're a very poetic composer.

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