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476 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Wed 29 Sep 2010, 02:17

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No rush or anything. Just curious.

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477 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Sun 03 Oct 2010, 22:11

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Chapter 24 is now posted on the blog...

Chapter 25 is the continuation of this chapter, then things really get going in chapter 26... I hope. I need to get caught up! But, school has to come first now, so I'll post new chapters as I finish them. I'm going to try and be done by the end of October... but who knows! LOL

As usual, comments welcome here and there. Enjoy!



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478 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Mon 04 Oct 2010, 18:50

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You're really good at those cliff hanger things, did you know that?

And I loved the closing line, "He ain't heavy, David. He's my brother." Makes me think of an Osmond's song. -dies laughing-

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479 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Mon 04 Oct 2010, 19:43

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Well, that final line is from a song, but if memory serves, it's by the Hollies... and I thought it was appropriate.

Re: cliffhanger things... is that a good thing or a bad thing, in your opinion? I'm just trying to keep interest in the story...



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480 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Mon 04 Oct 2010, 20:02

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Oh, honey, cliffhangers are a good thing. I'm hooked. There's no getting rid of me, Stef. No way in the WORLD!

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481 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Sun 10 Oct 2010, 00:40

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Joy joy! Chapter 25 is done! Check it out on the blog now.

Comments here or there are fine!



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482 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Sun 10 Oct 2010, 03:36

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Whoa, girl. I mean.. just... WHOA! And you said my sht from last night was brutal.

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483 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Sun 10 Oct 2010, 14:00

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It comes out of my head like that sometimes...

Did you catch the Elvis Costello reference in the last part of the chapter?

Wait til Neil is found... that kid who discovered his remains (and still doesn't have a name, though I'm thinking of calling him Joshua Rockwell <--another family reference.) will never forget what he saw, ever!

Sarah Kathryn is not going to like what she discovers in her husband's will, either.



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484 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Sun 10 Oct 2010, 14:19

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yep, I did catch that elvis costello reference. Nice.

Oh, I'm sure that Sarah Kathyrn isn't going to like what she finds in Neil's will... he left everything to Jamie. I'm sure of it. As for the kid... I'm sure he'll always remember finding a DEAD BODY! I'm never forget that shit either.

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485 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Thu 21 Oct 2010, 01:15

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Chapter 26 is now posted on the blog. You know the drill by now LOL

Comments welcome here or there.



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486 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Thu 21 Oct 2010, 02:25

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Girl, that is awesome. So much suspense. I loved it.

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487 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Thu 21 Oct 2010, 11:28

holy shit i had a lot of catching up to do since i had gotten my internet back...damn girl u really know how to keep the suspense going! i love this story! and the other one from disturbed1foreternity! both of these stories im following and enjoying every minute of it!

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488 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Fri 22 Oct 2010, 01:19

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Thank you so much for the compliments! I've been so busy lately with school that I don't have a lot of time to write.

The end is in sight, I think. It's the getting there that will be tough. Maybe by the end of the year, I'll actually get this mofo finished! And to think it started out as a 12 page idea back in May when I saw this video on YouTube: [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]



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489 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Fri 22 Oct 2010, 02:10

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THAT is fucked up. Is that REALLY how they used to open shows?

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490 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Fri 22 Oct 2010, 13:27

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Yeah... it was pretty bizarre from what I understand. David gets executed, then comes back to life to sing. And something in my head thought that a neat little story could come of that. 1,000 + pages later...



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491 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Fri 22 Oct 2010, 21:21

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That is insane. I would have loved to see that. That would have been wicked.

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492 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Sat 23 Oct 2010, 01:20

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I know, right?

Working on Chapter 27... Hopefully I'll be finished with it soon. I think that after I write about finding Neil's remains and the rally in Lowell, I'm going to do another time jump. The last one was when I aged Julia something like four years. This one will probably be six months to a year. Jordan and David's sons, and Jayme's daughter with Neil will be born in the interim.

Just a little preview... and a couple of surprises await.



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493 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Sat 23 Oct 2010, 21:27

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I can't wait. This will be to freakin awesome!

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494 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Sat 23 Oct 2010, 21:41

Steph, I pm'd you, and vikki, I tried to message you on myspace, but couldnt cuz ur setting is set to away....but i will say my idea i came up with on here, ok... my idea was something like the video on Land Of Confusion, and something from the intro that David did - the execution that inspired Steph- and heres another idea i thought of- when David is gets caught (going with the execution idea) Sarah Kathryn saves him....or something big like that- these stories gotta go out with a bang, but i know you girls have something up your sleeves, but i just thought i would throw these out there... im lookin forward to seeing what you guys do with your awesome stories!

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495 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Sun 24 Oct 2010, 20:50

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Working on new ideas... all I can say now is that the last chapter/epilogue is a wrap up of loose ends, explain what's next (i.e. sequel???), and maybe kill off a couple of more people.

It definitely will go out with a bang...

Thanks for the suggestions, Penni... I'll see if I can work some of them in there someplace.



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496 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Mon 25 Oct 2010, 00:30

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Chapter 27 is finished. It's a bit shorter than the other chapters, but I think it packs a punch or two...

Comments... well, you know you can leave 'em here or there. LOL

Enjoy!



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497 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Mon 25 Oct 2010, 02:30

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That's some good shit right there, I tell you what!

Ok, now that I've had my hick moment, great post tonight, Stef. It was awesome!

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498 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Mon 25 Oct 2010, 02:35

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That reminds me of this: You know how fairy tales begin right? Southern Fairy Tales are different.

Instead of "Once Upon a Time", Southern Fairy Tales begin "Y'all ain't gonna believe this shit!"

BTW thanks for the props. You can have all the "hick moments" you like LOL



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499 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Mon 25 Oct 2010, 02:56

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I just had to have a hick moment to break up the monotony. There's so much DRAMA going on where I'm at it's not even funny. Hick moments make everything better... most of the time.

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500 Re: Guiltypleasures' Disturbed fan fiction on Fri 29 Oct 2010, 16:32

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I'm probably not going to have a new chapter up until next week. I'll try and get it posted earlier, but I'm studying for a test on Monday and that might take a good chunk of my writing time... Media Law-- and it's worth a third of my grade!



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