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1Asylum Lyrics Empty Asylum Lyrics Thu 20 May 2010, 22:40

CrowX

CrowX
Administrator
Asylum Guy
Release me
No remnants were ever found of it
Feeling the heart bile
With every fake smile
Though no evidence was ever found
It never went away completely
I tried to welcome the unholy sound of it
Another day gone, another night's dawn
Dark forces pull me underground
They never went away completely
How can I feel this empty?
I will not recover this time
This loneliness is killing me
Will I ever know peace of mind again?
I don't believe it, I can't achieve it
I think it all is just another sign
It never went away completely

Terror is coursing in me
Dreading the final moment
When I have to dream
And feel you die, an asylum, I live a lie
Don't you know I'm in love with you
And I wasn't ready for asylum, relive a lie
To let go, now it's dragging me into your grave
Your asylum, forget the lie
Overcome by the feeling that
I won't get to join you in time
And the loneliness is killing me

Dead images are all around again
They're right behind me
They're gonna find me
Judgment from the immortal sin
That had enveloped me completely
I know I'll never know a peaceful night again
Afraid they'll hear me, they don't fear me
Punishment from the immoral crime
The debt was never paid completely

Terror is coursing in me
Dreading the final moment
When I have to dream
And feel you die, an asylum, I live a lie
Don't you know I'm in love with you
And I wasn't ready for asylum, relive a lie
To let go, now it's dragging me into your grave
Your asylum, forget the lie
Overcome by the feeling that
I won't get to join you in time
And the loneliness is killing me

In the end there will be no suffering, more suffering
In the end you will find out everything, not anything
In the end you may question your belief, what belief?
In the end you will realize finally how you are saved
This has gone on too long, no more demonic dreams
Destroyer come to light because the memory is killing me
An asylum, I live a lie
I let go now it's dragging me into your grave
For asylum, relive the lie
Overcome by the feeling that
I won't get to join you in time
This world is not fulfilling me
Don't need to live an asylum, I live a lie
Don't want to live an asylum, I live a lie
Don't need to live an asylum, I live a lie



Last edited by CrowX on Fri 27 Aug 2010, 13:33; edited 15 times in total

2Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 17:48

A Disturbed Mind

A Disturbed Mind
Believer
Cool thanks

3Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 17:51

bassman47

bassman47
Stricken
you guys are damn speedy at this

4Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 17:55

PoisonIvy

PoisonIvy
Haunted
great, thank you!

5Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 18:29

4everDisturbed

4everDisturbed
Inside The Fire
towards the end it is:
"That debt was never paid completely" not "That was never pain completely"

6Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 18:33

CrowX

CrowX
Administrator
4everDisturbed wrote:towards the end it is:
"That debt was never paid completely" not "That was never pain completely"


Thank you it is corrected any more let me know

7Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 18:43

4everDisturbed

4everDisturbed
Inside The Fire
Np. It looks really good
Disturbed Asylum
something to look more into is the word 'appellate' in the seventh line. i looked up the word and it doesnt make sense first of all its an adj.

8Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 18:44

Mr.Vlado

Mr.Vlado
Disturbed One
CrowX wrote:
4everDisturbed wrote:towards the end it is:
"That debt was never paid completely" not "That was never pain completely"


Thank you it is corrected any more let me know

Great lyrics - very fast :)

But I think there is another little mistake:
"that I won't get to join you time"
join you IN time is correct - it's only one time wrong ;)
Asylum Guy

9Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 18:53

CrowX

CrowX
Administrator
4everDisturbed wrote:Np. It looks really good
Disturbed Asylum
something to look more into is the word 'appellate' in the seventh line. i looked up the word and it doesnt make sense first of all its an adj.


Yeah i checked it out this is what it said

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10Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 18:59

4everDisturbed

4everDisturbed
Inside The Fire
CrowX wrote:
4everDisturbed wrote:Np. It looks really good
Disturbed Asylum
something to look more into is the word 'appellate' in the seventh line. i looked up the word and it doesnt make sense first of all its an adj.


Yeah i checked it out this is what it said

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it does sound right, but grammatically it wont work. you cant try to appellate something.

11Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 19:07

PoisonIvy

PoisonIvy
Haunted
In the end there will be no suffering (More suffering)
In the end we will find out everything (Not everything)
In the end you may question your belief (What belief)
In the end you will realize someday
How you were saved
This has gone on too long (Too long)
No more demonic race
Destroyer come to light
Because the memory is killing me


i love this part so much!!! well, i love the whole song, of course, but that part stands out for me

12Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 19:21

MistressDisturbed

MistressDisturbed
Stupified
It sounds like appellate though. The rest of the lyrics are good. I listened to it 5 times in a row, I fucking love this song!! Head Banger They have to release this for Rock Band next month, screw Guitar Hero, (no offense to any players here).

13Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 19:59

kr0w93

kr0w93
Asylum
MistressDisturbed wrote:It sounds like appellate though. The rest of the lyrics are good. I listened to it 5 times in a row, I fucking love this song!! Head Banger They have to release this for Rock Band next month, screw Guitar Hero, (no offense to any players here).


No. MAJOR OFFENSE TOWARDS EVERYONE!!!!


Jk; but yeah we need this for RB, NAO!


What I like most about this song is it reminds me of the good old days of The Sickness. Fast paced and Heavy.


BUT it does keep Dave's melodic vocals; Not like Believe but more TTF/Pain Redefined style

A good mix; and I do love that bass line in the beginning; def Johnny's best imo Electric guitar



Asylum Guy <---- *wants to give him a big celebration hug*

14Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 20:53

Mcaz

Mcaz
I believe it's "Dreading" Not "Shredding".

And it's "you will find out everything" not "we will"

15Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 21:02

4everDisturbed

4everDisturbed
Inside The Fire
Mcaz wrote:I believe it's "Dreading" Not "Shredding".

And it's "you will find out everything" not "we will"
I agree. and i think your right about it being dreading. he just doesn't articulate the "d"

16Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 22:46

4everDisturbed

4everDisturbed
Inside The Fire
Caught something else
No more demonic dreams not No more demonic race

17Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Thu 15 Jul 2010, 22:53

CrowX

CrowX
Administrator
Thanks guys let me know if you find any more good job.

18Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Fri 16 Jul 2010, 00:05

4everDisturbed

4everDisturbed
Inside The Fire
Okay now the one line of the song that i had no idea of what it was from my first listen, i think i got it. one of the last times it was playing i heard it. ive seen you guys put the word vile in there so it made me think.
Instead of "telling the heart vile" it should be "turning the heart vile"

19Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Fri 16 Jul 2010, 03:54

DisturbedShifty

DisturbedShifty
Disturbed One
No remnants were ever found of it
turning the heart Vile
With everything smile

It sounds like it should go: With every FAKE smile.

20Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Fri 16 Jul 2010, 04:59

4everDisturbed

4everDisturbed
Inside The Fire
DisturbedShifty wrote:No remnants were ever found of it
turning the heart Vile
With everything smile

It sounds like it should go: With every FAKE smile.
thats actually what i thought it was from the beginning but ive listened to that part over and over and im pretty sure its everything not every fake

21Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Fri 16 Jul 2010, 05:54

DisturbedShifty

DisturbedShifty
Disturbed One
Really? With Everything Smile? That doesn't even make sense.

22Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Fri 16 Jul 2010, 06:00

4everDisturbed

4everDisturbed
Inside The Fire
ya know man idk. with every fake smile makes much more sense. its just so hard to tell with david's voice.

23Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Fri 16 Jul 2010, 08:26

slamer80

slamer80
Believer
I believe its "every fake smile" too...

24Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Fri 16 Jul 2010, 12:45

ShockAndAwe

ShockAndAwe
Asylum
"That Debt was never pain completely"

That debt was never paid completely

25Asylum Lyrics Empty Re: Asylum Lyrics Fri 16 Jul 2010, 13:09

laurieann131313

laurieann131313
The Animal
i believe it's "every fake smile"

and at the end of the middle part it is "her memory is killing me"


lol....but i'm not 100% sure

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