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1My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Tue 12 Jan 2010, 12:09

Remiel

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I was sitting in the chatbox, being bored. After a few random sentences just to keep myself from being disconnected, I started writing to keep myself entertained. I bring this stupidity to you, free of charge.




[08:31:05] Remiel : Don't disconnect me Chatbox.

[08:31:12] Remiel : I'm watching you....

[08:37:06] Remiel : *couch*

[08:37:12] Remiel : Couch?

[08:37:17] Remiel : *cough*

(It starts here V)

[08:40:29] Remiel : Perched atop a flickering street light, Remiel waits.

[08:41:22] Remiel : The night has faded and the sun is revealing itself on the horizon, but he must get one kill before he flees from the light.

[08:42:06] Remiel : Impatiently twitching his fingers, he stares down the streets waiting for anyone to enter his sight.

[08:42:48] Remiel : "No need to be picky at this hour," he said to himself, "I just need a few ounces to make it to the next dark cycle..."

[08:44:48] Remiel : With the sun continuing to creep above the distant horizon, Remiel's twitching turns into a grasping of his perch.

[08:46:02] Remiel : The power of his grip puts dents in the metal of the street lamp below him. Gritting his teeth and grinding his fangs, he mutters, "I picked a bad spot to wait. There's no one coming down this road..."

[08:49:08] Remiel : Despite this, he waits still... Waits for anyone to enter his hunting range.

[08:50:47] Remiel : As the golden sphere sends its first rays toward the city structures, Remiel takes cover in his coat. After adjusting his hood and rolling down his sleeves, he resumes his perched position atop the lamp and continues to wait.

[08:55:39] Remiel : Growing more impatient, Remiel closes his eyes and strengthens his senses.

[08:56:27] Remiel : 'I can feel...' he thinks to himself, 'I can feel only one human life force nearby.'

[08:58:29] Remiel : Observing this fragile creature carefully, Remiel realizes that it is not coming in his direction. "Damn it," he growls, "This was a waste of time. I'm getting out of here before I'm sun-dried."

[08:59:25] Remiel : Leaping with force from his perch, Remiel shoots himself toward the shadows of the city alleys to take cover underground.

[09:00:26] Remiel : 'Next time... Next time I'll swim in a pool of blood.' He assured himself that he could do better, then hid himself away from the world until the darkness would come again.




It's just me writing about waiting in the chatbox when Bowers was the only other person online. I just thought it was interesting. Oh, Remiel's a vampire by the way, in case you didn't gather that.



Last edited by Remiel on Tue 12 Jan 2010, 12:25; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Typos. No reason to be sloppy.)

2My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Tue 12 Jan 2010, 12:17

Ravensclaw

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they say talking to someone who isent there is ok but when you answer your self back then you gone mad lol im not saying you gone mad remi im just saying lol

3My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Tue 12 Jan 2010, 12:22

Remiel

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Nah, I talk to myself plenty. People call me crazy, but what do they know? Nothing. I'd rather carry on a conversation with myself and not lose brain cells than try to talk to a normal person and want to kill myself.

4My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Tue 12 Jan 2010, 13:11

Darkking

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Remiel wrote:Nah, I talk to myself plenty. People call me crazy, but what do they know? Nothing. I'd rather carry on a conversation with myself and not lose brain cells than try to talk to a normal person and want to kill myself.

Me and you are allot alike remiel, nice little story by the way

5My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Wed 13 Jan 2010, 09:22

S.M.F

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Eye of the Storm
Good Story.

6My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Wed 13 Jan 2010, 18:46

LairyFairy

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Asylum
Lmao your so random x

7My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Wed 13 Jan 2010, 19:23

Bowers

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Immortalized
thats bizarre but quite good

8My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Wed 13 Jan 2010, 19:48

FaerieCorpsey

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Warrior
To be fair I talk to myself when noone is with me in there sometimes... Then sometimes I say something outta place and I think... I should be kicked for that but if I kick myself who will moderate anyone who might come in before I come back...
It plagues me.

9My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Tue 09 Feb 2010, 08:11

Syncpro

Syncpro
Dehumanized
Good story LOL Just Kidding Rockout Indestructible

10My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Tue 09 Feb 2010, 15:19

babygirlpj2007

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Warrior
wow remi, u are one talented individual! u can draw and write incredibly well! wow, u could get a good job doin that!

11My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Wed 10 Feb 2010, 19:57

Dawn_Cato

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Whatever floats your sweet boat darlin....you like talking to yourself its cool with me.....I have a bigger issue,,its called.....PHONE SEX. LOL [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]

12My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Thu 11 Feb 2010, 15:01

FaerieCorpsey

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Warrior
lol I'm a psychology student I should really be careful about who sees me talking to myself... Could be dangerous.

13My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Sun 14 Feb 2010, 18:16

babygirlpj2007

babygirlpj2007
Warrior
sometimes i hav fights with myself, and then end up not talking to myself for a week....lol sorry, had to.. lol!

14My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Sun 14 Feb 2010, 20:13

FaerieCorpsey

FaerieCorpsey
Warrior
lol I talk to myself a lot but mainly because other people stop listening....

15My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Mon 15 Feb 2010, 17:09

Morbid Spawn

Morbid Spawn
One of The Ten Thousand
cool story bro... I actauly mean it lol

16My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Tue 16 Mar 2010, 20:11

Remiel

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Jeeze, this stupid little chatbox story has gotten more hits than my fiction in the art section. I don't understand people. Is the other one too long?

17My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Fri 03 Sep 2010, 11:25

Yumiyuri

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Immortalized
lol, no people just like randomness

18My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Mon 06 Sep 2010, 08:24

Melloow

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Dehumanized
THIS IS AWESOME!!

19My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Empty Re: My Personal Chatbox Storytime. Mon 06 Sep 2010, 08:42

Yumiyuri

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^ epicaly awesome.

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